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« on: January 19, 2017, 5:49 PM »

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So you see. He is in mid air
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« Reply #1 on: January 19, 2017, 6:57 PM »

The original image provides visual context missing in the more recent version, explaining the roll to the bird's left and the bird's looking down and to the (bird's) left.  The word "trampolining" also threw me, giving me to wonder why the bird would bounce from a springy surface, such as a twig.  Here, it is clear that the bird is not in open air but close to a twig.  Google also wasn't much help in explaining "trampolining" as birds do it.
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« Reply #2 on: January 19, 2017, 7:09 PM »

If I were you  scoundrel1728 

I would google the word JOKE
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« Reply #3 on: January 19, 2017, 7:25 PM »

If you were me, you would think and do as I do.
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« Reply #4 on: January 20, 2017, 1:45 AM »

We all think differently - that's why all art forms work by being original. Otherwise we would all like the same things.

I'm with Alan on this; the original is better. But an even better version would be to edit in those clouds.
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« Reply #5 on: January 21, 2017, 1:36 PM »

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« Reply #6 on: April 29, 2018, 11:06 AM »

We all think differently - that's why all art forms work by being original. Otherwise we would all like the same things.

I'm with Alan on this; the original is better. But an even better version would be to edit in those clouds.

One minute you encouraging folk to experiment then next your putting it down
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« Reply #7 on: May 1, 2018, 2:50 PM »

Not all experiments are successful. I would suggest editing out the twigs in the background that are skewering the birdbut leaving in the rest of the tree, and then optionally putting in the clouds as in the first image.

And BigAl didn't really put down what you did but suggested a way to make it better. he didn't really deserve that last response, especially after your three-month pouting session.
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